Once Upon a Time. I live next to a forest. I was seeping at Night. When I Woke up at 9 a.m. I Went Outside to have some fresh air. When I was Walking down the forest I heard something Rory. So I walked towards the roaring was Come in from a cave . I got scared . so I walk in the cave. Then I saw a DANGEROUS!! Then I screamed !!!out Loud. but the DANGEROUS got Angry at me. so then Ran away. When I make it back home. And I was so scared. When I Felt so sad was I got some big Meet And two metal sticks at the Shop. so I went back to the cave when the DANGEROUS saw me with one eye. When I got so scared but the DANGEROUS smell the Meet but I was Still scared when the dangerous went up to me Then it nodded my head to me but I was get Confuse . Then I realise I wanted the food . was when he was About to edit but when he warmed up the meat because the meet was sill Cold . I felt so amazed when he did that .
Then he gave me a second to hop on . then I hop on. Then the Kingdom saw me. Felt proud of myself. But my mum and Dad. Then I asked them can I have the dangerous. Then Mum and Dad decided. And then said no I'm just kidding they said yes. And that the End of the story
Hi Vaha,
ReplyDeleteYou have put an amazing effort into your learning today! Well done! It's always a really good idea to read your story out loud to yourself when you are checking it. Ask yourself, "Does this make sense?" while you are reading it out loud.
Looking forward to seeing your work tomorrow!
Miss West
Hi Vaha, I see that you have written a creative narrative story about your dangerous pet that I don't think I should touch if you had one. Im so proud of you, sitting in the room for about an hour writing. Well done, you are a star.
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