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Tuesday, 16 February 2021

Don't Look Away

DON”T LOOK AWAY: Once upon a time I was in my room. I was just on my phone. My brother Chris was in his room playing games. My brother came to my room and said charlotte are you ok and I said yes am ok. Then I went to my window and looked to see the backyard. Then I saw

someone standing in my backyard.

I got my phone and called my dad and said……...... Hi dad hi honey tell Chris to go do the lawn mower. Ok but they someone standing in are backyard send me a pic and what does he look like he look like well he in a (black rip suit) (coles in it)and a (bag on his head with chains on it)

honey lock all the (door) and (window) tell Chris to do it now am come home now and honey ( DON’T LOOK AWAY)...........

Dad dad ok Don’t look away ok hi charlotte have you seen my other controller what are you looking at charlotte Don’t look Don’t look Don’t look Don’t look man you had to look. Ok you Don’t look away ok wait but what are you going to do. lock all the windows and the doors ok go and Don’t look away ok ok? (Click) (Click) (Click) (Click). Ok i'm done let me see how much have you been looking away. I did not look away, tell me now did you I didn't tell me now did you I didn't tell (breathing noises) Chris they're someone behind me go look no no no just look! fine i will look on no it him let me look no it ok i will tape the eye…….. Done it ok he can't see. Ouch chris help me i can't just do it ok! move off of her move.

(breathing). Honey

Are you and Chris ok yes dad yes. You again where's the mirror give me the mirror look here……... smash. It all goods he’s gone. dad tell me what happening dad i will tell you later come let go somewhere no dad tell me what happening ok fine. Then me and your mother met you guys weren’t even born but that thing been following us i try to ignore it but it didn’t want to. so that how we get rid of it ok ok now come on let go ok let go.


  (sorry about the creepy photo and it's fake)


 
 
Hi everyone! This is my writing task. It is like really scary. Hope you don't get to spooked. Please leave a positive comment on my blog. 

3 comments:

  1. This shows some really good creativity Vaha, I feel like this would be a great idea for a movie! I'll help you touch up a few things once we're back at school so we can make it even scarier!

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  2. OK Mr Hughes and Thank you for commenting on my blog bye.

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  3. Hi vaha it’s me your sister Catherine I just want to say that it is cool and creepy and I just want to say that hi mr Hughes bye vaha.

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